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The author messaged me about Fanfic.Uchiha Heiress Remix and has stated that the scenes that led to the page getting cut have since been removed from the fic. I am re-opening the thread to see if the fic needs to be re-evaluated as a result.
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Uchiha Heiress Remix by JGResidentEvil and fight2protect....
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What I've heard about this fic is: that the SPAG is okay. That it's the content you have to watch out for, what with annoying tropes like bashing and council. Most importantly, that the first several chapters would be a challenge, but that it gets better afterwards. This last one in particular is probably true.
Mar 28, 2023 · To inform though, the current version of it was an updated version of a prior one where. . .it actually had a lemon scene, which was what I was pressured into writing.
Mar 28, 2023 · Read/Skimmed over the replacement and I still vote for cutting. The emphasis on Hinata's "still growing cleavage" and "soft breast" combined with the focus on Naruto's "male urges" and the constant mentions of Naruto being on top of Hinata, panting, and moaning still heavily sexualizes Hinata and the act.
Mar 29, 2023 · Well, in my opinion the only way to actually avoid the issue would be to not have the scene at all. It sounds extreme but with the intention of the scene itself, IDK if just trimming out details will actually fix the problem, which is that it's two underaged characters having a (mostly) naked makeout session.
